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Comments on: Like Riding a Bike http://www.loveandwartx.com/2010/03/like-riding-a-bike/ All's Fair in Love & War Tue, 31 Aug 2010 01:32:29 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: WA_side http://www.loveandwartx.com/2010/03/like-riding-a-bike/comment-page-1/#comment-166 WA_side Tue, 06 Apr 2010 07:53:13 +0000 http://www.loveandwartx.com/?p=773#comment-166 "The expensive bottle of chianti Simon has ordered didn’t hurt." perhaps should be "had". "He filled a second glass and it swallowed it as well." appears to have one "it" too many. I have my theories on Kit, but am desperate for further clues. “The expensive bottle of chianti Simon has ordered didn’t hurt.” perhaps should be “had”.

“He filled a second glass and it swallowed it as well.” appears to have one “it” too many.

I have my theories on Kit, but am desperate for further clues.

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